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18h06m22 / 13.Feb.2008
worker: john

you don’t dream, for they don’t come true for you, not anymore. now, The wrk.grp’s 31 houses comes riding through with hope. this collection of more than 90 drawings illustrates the salient aspects of 31 homes of various styles, from a witch’s cookie kitchen to a sophisticated freeze-dried house to an hollowed-out international style ranch. Each design includes usefully allusive floor plans, or section drawings, or elevations, or perspectives, as well as a description of the particular life script that gave it birth. Keeping in mind that a chief priority for a small home is often lack of identity, most of the plans incorporate some idiosyncratic element that you can hang your hat on. There are dozens of plans suitable for every environment and deviance in the world. The designs are all a direct result of the unhinged collaboration of two thinkers who make up for their lack of communication with their delight in obvious conflict and reverence for cinema and rock music. Contact the wrk.grp to be fitted for your dwelling. you may weep tonight but you wont lie awake.

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we came through!!


-ashley
[ 18h19m30 | 13.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

is that all?


-john
[ 18h50m26 | 13.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

i will go over it again after my cheezstakes arrive.


-ashley
[ 18h52m43 | 13.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

hmm, the whole text is pretty excellent and states precisely what we need to tell these rubes.

maybe the sentence: ‘Keeping in mind that a chief priority for a small home is often lack of identity, most of the plans incorporate some idiosyncratic element that you can hang your hat on.’ can be reconfigured a bit, but its thrust is on target.


-ashley
[ 11h50m49 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

“Keeping in mind that a chief priority for a small home is often lack of identity, most of the plans incorporate some idiosyncratic element that you can hang your hat on.”

The chief priority for a small home is often lack of identity. Keeping this in mind, most of the plans incorporate some idiosyncratic element on which you can hang your hat.

or

The chief priority for a small house is often lack of identity. Keeping this in mind, most of the plans incorporate some idiosyncratic element which informs that you are home.

?


-ashley
[ 11h53m35 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

i like the latter. i really took no liberties deviating from the source text.


-john
[ 12h12m05 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

[quote comment="11610"]i like the latter. i really took no liberties deviating from the source text.[/quote]

hmmm, i tried to sing it along w/ the tune, but…


-ashley
[ 12h31m36 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]


i see. we can dispense w/ the edited sentence, if you wish.


-ashley
[ 12h44m35 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

you would rather use the original?!


-john
[ 12h54m24 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

the edit seems superior, but i don’t want to disrupt the purity of the derivation.


-ashley
[ 13h12m58 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

i guess i would suggest using the edit then.


-john
[ 15h37m41 | 14.Feb.2008 ] [ link ]

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